hogwarts is comlicated

Like all good romance books they would start off with once upon a time, and they would have prinecess ,pinces,step sisters.That live in a castle,well this story does start out with a castle but not a ordinary one,at all.So with that lets begin! I'm going to my first year of my new school called hogwarts.My whole family is in Slytherin,but I want to be in Gryffindor.Also I don't want to be a DeathEater,so i'm trying to break the curse,well i call it that.
"First years line up right here please."We all went to were she said to go but did not line up it was more of a gint clut of first years."I'm name is Professor Stuchmus I will sort you by the Sorting Hat,it will tell you if you will go in to Gryffindor,Slytherin,Hufflepuff,or Ravenclaw."she said smiling.Then she lead us in to a big room with people that are older and sitting waching us come in."Ok i will call your name and you will sit in the stoll and the hat will tell you what house you are in."professor stuchmus loudly said.
"Ashton aeyrs"Ashton walked up there and put the Sorting Hat on"gryffindor!"yelled the hat."Jake Build""Gryffindor!" boomed the hat again."Jonny Evens" said by loudly stuchmus"Slytherin" it said."Lily Shay" the professor boomed."Gryffindor!" I could not belive what I just heard I-I'm in Gryffindor!.
The commen room is off the hizzle and in my drom is Ashton,Lavender,Natalie,and Selena.I was walking to my next class when I heard a boy crying in a emety class room.I walked in and I saw who was crying it was a boy, he had black hair and he was not fat,but he wasn't skinny either he all so had glasses.I walked up to him and asked "Dude are you ok?""No,my brother sent me a letter telling me that my mom died early today." he sniffed."Oh,well I'm very sorry,but you sould get to class." I spoke clamly and slowly."ok" he said and got up to leave.He got to the door and turned around he said very soft"Thank you."I nodded,he smiled and turned away.
We have a free period so I'm just walking along the beach,when I bumed in to somebody it was,Jonny Evens.Jonny is the bad boy at school i'm surpised hes not in jail.He was really cute he had blonde hair and he had hes muggle clothes on,and he has the perfect smile.No no I'm thinking this."What are you doing her Evens!" Isaid as rudely as I can.He smriked and said"I can be here you know."
Months have gone by and test are over and now I have to leave this wonderful place."Hey Shay you leaving so quikly?"Jonny smirked."Why you care Evens?"I said."Just wondering baby."He siad and walked my way and lightly put his hand on my face and then put my hair behinde my ear.Jonny walked away leaveing me their fozen in what he just said and did.When I got on the train I asked myself, Did he really like me?Why did he call me baby?Icouldn't answer any of my quistions.At that moment the train stoped and I got out still wondering about Jonny.


I'm going to make another one after I get to comments,but they have to tell me if you guys want me to make another one.If you have ideas i would love to hear them.