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keri12
When the sun doesn't shine and all you can see through the window is rain, Jaime walkers is either in her room talking to her best friend,Amanda,or in her room playing board games with her little brother.
kiss-kay
its ok so far but when u write the second part put some more detail and dialog i mean i bet it will me a very amazing story so i dont want to tell u how to write it if thats what ur thinking. Anyway have fun writing and for another tip put some of u in the story bc if there is no u then its really not ur story at all. I hope u got some ideas from what i said and if u dont like me right now just say it idk really.
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